Overall Interest - 4/5 - I love the expression, the pose and the fact that she's got the flame. It's a lovely mix and definitely adds some interest to it. Even if she's posing for a photo, it's better than just... standing there.

Accuracy - 3/5 - I know you asked if there was anythign to change, but honestly? I wasn't really wanting to affect the entry that much. I dunno if that would have been fair. ^ ^;;

But! While overall, quite accurate, there are a couple of small things.
1 - She could be a bit paler being dead. lol. I DO realise that could largely be chalked up to lighting though, which is why it isn't a huge deal.
2 - She tends to have pink streaks in her hair, and sadly the pink is lacking. Again, not a huge thing, but it is still a thing.

Overall Impression - 3/5 - Mid range because I'm not sure if this was something new or whatever for ya. ^ ^;;

Overall Effort - 4/5 - I know you can do stuff of this quality, I've looked through your dA, but at the same time, comparing this to the Volt art you've done (or even the previous piece of Desiree you've done for me) I can definitely see that there is more effort here.

Final Comments - I absolutely love the flames and face~<3 Her lips look so lush!

Saeyra (with Kaia):
Overall Interest - 3/5
Accuracy - 5/5
Overall Impression - 4/5
Overall Effort - 5/5
Comments: The image really pops. For such a subdued and subtle pose, it really has a depth to it that is amazing. While the pose itself is rather simple, the fact that she's wielding her fire really brings something to the image. Overall, quite good!

Overall Interest - 4/5 - You captured the fact that she's dead and can float. That by default gets points. Lol. Beyond that, I do like how you did the pose too. It actually seems like there's more life to it than just there, since there IS movement in the image.

Accuracy - 3/5 - One big thing... her hair isn't pink ^ ^;; I know Octology gave her a very warm tone to her hair, but I did say pay more attention to the 'details' tab than the images. Sadly, the hair colour thing did knock a bit off =( sorry. The only other thing is that she's supposed to be a bit paler, but that's not a big deal. Easily identifiable as Sierra, so all good~<3 (I wouldn't even point 'em out if it weren't for the fact that this is an art contest and all ^ ^;;)

Overall Impression - 4/5 - You outright said you were trying something new with the hair, and it paid off. I do rather like the look of it.

Overall Effort - 4/5 - Considering I'm used to seeing Chibis from you, the fact that this is a 'proper' Fullbody counts.

Final Comments - Bby, you know I'll relish any art I can get from you. Thank you so much for entering~<3

dawnpainterz (with Sierra):
Overall Interest - 4/5
Accuracy - 4/5
Overall Impression - 4/5
Overall Effort - 5/5
Comments: That hair! Holy crap, that hair is sumptuous! And it flows amazingly! The pose looks decently dynamic, and her expression is definitely a focal point as well, looking rather irritated and ready to dish out her anger. Pretty darn good!