I’m a recent aspiring poet since this year. Because I’m going through really, really bad depression, grief, sadness and paranoia, I felt the need to write my feelings out and it turns out I love it. My current favourite poet is Emily Dickinson.
I need to find all my poems I wrote on Facebook because no one gave me any feedback on it. ;_;
Anyway I just wanted to know what you guys think of them. :)
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Suffering, strength, battle
Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairytale. Because then I wouldn’t feel this eternal emptiness that lingers inside me.
Because then I will not feel pain, suffering, hurt. But then what would that say about me? Because of what I’ve endured and is still enduring, I will come out of this blackness a stronger person, a warrior, a fighter destined for greatness. I will carry my head up high with a thick skin and strong resilience ready to face the battles of what life may throw at me. I will soar through the night skies with Maximum Ride-like wings with the constellations flying by me with lightning speed. I will look up at the moon and it will smile upon me in glorious luminescence.
Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairytale. Because then I wouldn’t feel this eternal emptiness that lingers inside me.
Because then I will not feel pain, suffering, hurt. But then what would that say about me? Because of what I’ve endured and is still enduring, I will come out of this blackness a stronger person, a warrior, a fighter destined for greatness. I will carry my head up high with a thick skin and strong resilience ready to face the battles of what life may throw at me. I will soar through the night skies with Maximum Ride-like wings with the constellations flying by me with lightning speed. I will look up at the moon and it will smile upon me in glorious luminescence.
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
@juliette: I think this is lovely and that you should keep writing. ^^
Thinking about playing Pokemon Crystal again. 
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Having you as a Voltie would be awesome.