Forums Wonderland Ch. 13 Escape From Wonderland
We refused to leave Vivi and Vanora behind. So we chose our own path, even though it wasn't give to us as an option. And it worked ^^
I Honestly Wonder If The Writers Find That Annoying, Amusing,
Sweet, Or Just Plain Weird. Lmao
Sweet, Or Just Plain Weird. Lmao
I doubt annoying otherwise they wouldn't have let us change it but the rest all sound about right.
I'm not too sure, but I'm glad they put up with us enough to do it :P (So if you're reading this, thank you!! )
If, however, we did make the change feel forced, then our apologies for wasting your original work but we appreciate it.
Yeah, Major Kudos To The Writer(s)! Blows Kisses.
Yall Are Beyond The Best! Magnifique! True Team Players!
Yall Are Beyond The Best! Magnifique! True Team Players!
@Faust Sheep: I must say, you are right. Static does resemble a goat which makes his framing for the crime quite symbolic. He was the scapegoat.
She finally kissed the girl!
Aww how very touching.
FYI I noticed a typo in the fine print.
"Grants will be rewarded after Chapter Seven is unlocked"
We're way past chapter 7. :vanora_xd:
AWWH! OH MY *flails around*
so cute! I love this so so much
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I like how Frizz is the one covering Static's eyes, not the other way around. And Frizz is the youngest. XD
That was incredibly touching.
Foever in my heart
Spookums 11/25/18
Angus 6/23/19
Mom 6/29/19
Dad 11/29/2021
Spookums 11/25/18
Angus 6/23/19
Mom 6/29/19
Dad 11/29/2021
Come to think of it was that even necessary? How does Static see with those bangs?
No one looking at him can see his handsome face!
Vanora:
[You have decided to alter the story]
With the Hostess' information fresh in your head, you convince Static to go back to the Card Knight which is not difficult. He sees your reasoning and realizes that if you all have her Maiden on your side, earning the Knight's trust is surely made possible.
"Hm? I thought you left already," the Knight eyes Static carefully.
He smiled gently, "We were going to, but we spoke with the Hostess and... she told us about her curse."
"So you know," she said quietly. "In truth, you weren't wrong. The Rabbit and I worked together on this - taking the scepter, I mean. It was my only option to help her. But I wanted to get you home, too, and I was going to wait until the gem's magic transported you back to take it. There's no telling how many charges it has, after all, and you getting home is important. Plus, you helped many of my friends enough on your journey. I saw it through my eye." She pointed to her eyes and the symbols in each flashed.
"That's... wow," Static gasped. "But then... there's no reason you can't just take it now and use it, right? If it breaks, we'll figure something out, and if it doesn't, we can still get out."
The Knight chuckled, "I... yeah, you're right. I made it more complicated, or maybe you're just too soft. Well, lay it on me then. We have to break mine first." She held out her hand with a grin.
"Right!" Static handed her the gem and she called upon its power to break her servitude.
[You have decided to alter the story]
With the Hostess' information fresh in your head, you convince Static to go back to the Card Knight which is not difficult. He sees your reasoning and realizes that if you all have her Maiden on your side, earning the Knight's trust is surely made possible.
"Hm? I thought you left already," the Knight eyes Static carefully.
He smiled gently, "We were going to, but we spoke with the Hostess and... she told us about her curse."
"So you know," she said quietly. "In truth, you weren't wrong. The Rabbit and I worked together on this - taking the scepter, I mean. It was my only option to help her. But I wanted to get you home, too, and I was going to wait until the gem's magic transported you back to take it. There's no telling how many charges it has, after all, and you getting home is important. Plus, you helped many of my friends enough on your journey. I saw it through my eye." She pointed to her eyes and the symbols in each flashed.
"That's... wow," Static gasped. "But then... there's no reason you can't just take it now and use it, right? If it breaks, we'll figure something out, and if it doesn't, we can still get out."
The Knight chuckled, "I... yeah, you're right. I made it more complicated, or maybe you're just too soft. Well, lay it on me then. We have to break mine first." She held out her hand with a grin.
"Right!" Static handed her the gem and she called upon its power to break her servitude.
Sweet!
There is something haunting in the light of the moon;
It has all the dispassionateness of a disembodied soul, and something of its inconceivable mystery.
It has all the dispassionateness of a disembodied soul, and something of its inconceivable mystery.
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Having you as a Voltie would be awesome.