need some feedback on these linearts~ (wips)

TheArtOfTheFart

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hello~ Just looking for some feedback on a few linearts I'm making. : >

most are finished, a few are not. Any constructive criticism is welcomed, as I'm always learning and growing (these are largly uncolored as these are FUN arts I'm doing on my own time, not commissions)

Millet

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Millet, spilling the tea:

I don't have constructive feedback. Just love the undertale one a lot wand wanted to say that. xD

Priestess of Pie

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Hey great art! Not really much criticism here, your lines are so smooth. If you want to make your lines stand out a little more you could try experimenting with more varied line widths. Not necessarily needed depending on how it's colored but it would make the line art easier to be interpreted.

Mallow

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My Sons

Saeyra

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@TheArtOfTheFart: Jesus christ! That's really hard to critique..why are your lines so amazing?! HOW DO YOU GET YOUR LINES SO AMAZING?!?! I demand that you teach me all your sorcery!

Millet

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Millet, spilling the tea:

This video refers to inking specifically but I think the tips in it apply here.
the varying styles of line art and how much they can POP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQuLvpArrPo
(I'm no artist though ahha)

TheArtOfTheFart

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Millet:

Millet, spilling the tea:

I don't have constructive feedback. Just love the undertale one a lot wand wanted to say that. xD

UNDERTALE FTW! *cheers*

TheArtOfTheFart

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Priestess of Pie:

Hey great art! Not really much criticism here, your lines are so smooth. If you want to make your lines stand out a little more you could try experimenting with more varied line widths. Not necessarily needed depending on how it's colored but it would make the line art easier to be interpreted.

oh I do do that now and then! usually after coloring though. (that way I can go back to the lineart and adjust the line widths to the proper areas to give full impact.

TheArtOfTheFart

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Saeyra:

@TheArtOfTheFart: Jesus christ! That's really hard to critique..why are your lines so amazing?! HOW DO YOU GET YOUR LINES SO AMAZING?!?! I demand that you teach me all your sorcery!

errrr. I can't say tbh. I just tweaked with my brushes till I got the line consistency I was satisfied with? even then it's not really a brush that smooths itself out, so it relies on my sense of touch for the smooth part...….I THINK It looks so smooth because I literally draw with my fingers on an ipad screen. *wiggles my smol hands* to me it's more precise to rely on my own hands, then using a stylus.

.//o//.

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Saeyra

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@TheArtOfTheFart: Cool! I never met an artist who doesn't use a stylus or mouse for lineart. Thanks for sharing your secrets with me

PS: We have a no triple posting rule on the whole forum (except in the undercurrent). So we generally just mention multiple people and reply to all of them in the same post. :vanora_smile:

Always ping me please.

Forums Artist Galleries need some feedback on these linearts~ (wips)

TheArtOfTheFart

Millet

Priestess of Pie

Saeyra

Millet

TheArtOfTheFart

TheArtOfTheFart

TheArtOfTheFart

Saeyra

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