@Lunakiri: Oh man. The emotion in your poems is something I want to capture in overall writing as well. There's nothing better than expression, and I think poems can represent that better than long-winded stories. XD
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@Dowan: I can agree with that, for some of the ll writing. But I think it boils down to when writing? It's really hard to get the right balance sometimes. You're too likely to be too wordy, or not wordy enough. Unless you can match the balance perfectly, or at least almost, then it really will lose a lot of the effect/weight.
But that's just me.
And here's one more that I adore.
I love my life
I love the way
That the river flows
What can I say?
There's nothing that
I wish to change
I love it all
Even the strange.
Some stuff is odd
That, I will admit
But it's my life
And it is legit.
I love my life
I love the way
That everything goes
When I can't stay.
There's nothing that
I wish to change
I love it all
Even the deranged.
Some stuff is odd
That, I will admit
But it's my life
And I wish to quit
I love my lfe
I love the days
That I can just
Count the ways.
Let me change
Every damn thing
I hate it all
I hate the sting.
Some stuff is shit
And others, bad.
But it's my life,
And it's all I've had.
I loved my life
I loved the things
That happened to me
What the day brings.
Let me see what
It is that changed
Between now and then
What I've exhchanged.
This life is scary
And I know it's true
I just hate it
Why can't I be you?
I fucking love that one. And I don't know why
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@Unicorn: No worries! I get that.
I probably should eat myself, too. > >
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@Lunakiri: it is 1:16 in the morning I know I shouldn't eat at this hour
but I was hungry and didn't make anything really I wasn't hungry
but I was hungry and didn't make anything really I wasn't hungry
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@Unicorn: Lol!
Yeahhh
I'm an hour later than you, even.
Sooooo yeah. I shouldn't be eating at this hour either. But same as you, I'm hungry. XD
So I'mma eat this sammich
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@Lunakiri: Yeah, writing is mostly about execution. Your idea can be old as the hills, but if you approach it from an innovative perspective with your own unique language and style, you can make it as exciting as something fresh.
Or so I'd like to believe. XD
That poem is solid, and I feel like I have an idea why you like it so much. Unlike the others, it's melancholy instead of dark and has a hopeful ring to it.
Or so I'd like to believe. XD
That poem is solid, and I feel like I have an idea why you like it so much. Unlike the others, it's melancholy instead of dark and has a hopeful ring to it.
@Dowan: Good Morning! :) Nice outfit you got there! hehe
Yup I'm sure I'll always run into some that are into like me. :)
My stories tend to be very small.....they are rarely ever really big. lol But still fun all the same. :)
@Lunakiri: Hello my dear! :)
Yup I'm sure I'll always run into some that are into like me. :)
My stories tend to be very small.....they are rarely ever really big. lol But still fun all the same. :)
@Lunakiri: Hello my dear! :)
@Ravaen: Morning, and thank you! Finally got most of the items. ;D
Nothin' wrong with small stories. I actually prefer a few paragraphs as it's less stressful to write and you can generally finish in one sitting as opposed to going back to it for days. XD
Nothin' wrong with small stories. I actually prefer a few paragraphs as it's less stressful to write and you can generally finish in one sitting as opposed to going back to it for days. XD
@Dowan: Sweet! I need to get a move on to get at LEAST one of each item! hehe
I do small ones bc it helps the artist get a feeling for the character. hehe And...it's less stressful. LOL
I do small ones bc it helps the artist get a feeling for the character. hehe And...it's less stressful. LOL
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@Ravaen: Overall, I'm all right~<3
A bitt irritated, but all over overall.
How about yourself?
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@Lunakiri: uh oh! hope things get better for you!
I'm doing alright. Hubby left to help a friend and my kiddo is playing some lego batman game. So I am just posting on here. hehe
Lazy days for the win!
I'm doing alright. Hubby left to help a friend and my kiddo is playing some lego batman game. So I am just posting on here. hehe
Lazy days for the win!
@Ravaen: Lazy days for the win, most certainly!
And cool that you can have a lazy day. I know that having a kid can be... well, it can really eat into your personal time. Lol
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@Lunakiri: It's been raining for the past 2-3 days so it's hard NOT to be lazy. LOL
hehe yeah it can...and he is so HYPER! It's why I love school days and HATE no school days. Next week they only have school on Monday/Tuesday. OTL
hehe yeah it can...and he is so HYPER! It's why I love school days and HATE no school days. Next week they only have school on Monday/Tuesday. OTL
@Ravaen: Oh geez. Rainy days really do lend themselves to lazy days, don't they? XD
And lol! Do have fun with that =P
Don't start pulling your hair out or anything though... that just wouldn't be good. lol
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@Lunakiri: Boy do they ever! And drinking warm tea doesn't really help either. LOL
HAHA I don't wanna go bald that is for sure! I may ask the neighbor boy to take him for a bit if I need a break. :)
HAHA I don't wanna go bald that is for sure! I may ask the neighbor boy to take him for a bit if I need a break. :)
@Ravaen: How old is your kid, if you don't mind my asking?
And if you can get help when he's drivin' ya up the wall, then all the better, lol.
I've raised three kids, I know how it can be hectic as hell XD
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@Lunakiri: WOW! The text on the Event forum is Orange now! SWEET!
I don't mind. He turns 10 on the 27th of this month. :)
Yup the neighbor boy turned 15 recently so I know I can trust him. :)
I only have the one but he is ADHD and I don't medicate him.
I don't mind. He turns 10 on the 27th of this month. :)
Yup the neighbor boy turned 15 recently so I know I can trust him. :)
I only have the one but he is ADHD and I don't medicate him.
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Having you as a Voltie would be awesome.