@Ixora: The first one is called appelflap and the second one are appelbeignets.
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@Ixora: The first one is called appelflap and the second one are appelbeignets.
November 2017 - February 2018
Thanks guys. -hugs you all-
It's just I worked really hard creating a new OC yesterday and coming up with a good storyline for her, making her fit very well into the story world I created her for. As one of the main characters, but not THE main character. But the thing is, this was originally supposed to be told from the point of view from the MAIN character, in first person, but there are things happening with this new character in story that the old main character could NEVER know about. Unless she was some creepy little stalker...and somehow followed her around, everywhere she went. Plus, I kind of like this new oc MORE than the original main character and kind of want to make her the MAIN character now. But at the same time, the old main character would have made a very interesting first person narrator.
And basically, I'm stuck with...do I still want to include her in the same story, and just tell the story from third person, so I can include multiple characters thoughts and feelings, or make these two entirely different stories? And change the first character's story around once again? (I've done this to her three times already...first she was a main character in a vampire story, then faeries, now a nephilim- cambion school type of thing.)
It's just I worked really hard creating a new OC yesterday and coming up with a good storyline for her, making her fit very well into the story world I created her for. As one of the main characters, but not THE main character. But the thing is, this was originally supposed to be told from the point of view from the MAIN character, in first person, but there are things happening with this new character in story that the old main character could NEVER know about. Unless she was some creepy little stalker...and somehow followed her around, everywhere she went. Plus, I kind of like this new oc MORE than the original main character and kind of want to make her the MAIN character now. But at the same time, the old main character would have made a very interesting first person narrator.
And basically, I'm stuck with...do I still want to include her in the same story, and just tell the story from third person, so I can include multiple characters thoughts and feelings, or make these two entirely different stories? And change the first character's story around once again? (I've done this to her three times already...first she was a main character in a vampire story, then faeries, now a nephilim- cambion school type of thing.)
@vengeance: I googled them and nothing english came up ; ___ ;
But luckily there's google translate XD
Both of them have apples? Sounds nice :3
But luckily there's google translate XD
Both of them have apples? Sounds nice :3
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@vengeance: oh, well then, glad it doesn't really translate onto here as much if at all, then? x)
I'm more likely to talk to people online than I am irl, but even then I have a limit
which okios is making me push and break, crai...
@Ixora: Yes both have apples in it. Both things are also not really eaten outside or country.
@Lithinel: Maybe a new story would be the best.
@Apollo Im Burning: I can talk to people I work with. But talking to strangers. NOP.
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@Lithinel: Just wanted to say I read what you wrote and I'm not ignoring it because I feel you so much on it!
but I can't comment on it right now because I feel so dead inside from okios' post auction
so I don't want to say something that kind of just brushes on it x.x
i don't even know if that made sense, sorry x.x
I am so done with talking right now xD
@vengeance: The first one reminds me of apple turnovers but the second one is unique.
But it seems simple enough to make...... I think 🤔
It makes me think of... apple donuts or something like.... donut-shaped apple tempura XD
But it seems simple enough to make...... I think 🤔
It makes me think of... apple donuts or something like.... donut-shaped apple tempura XD
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@vengeance: ah yeah, talking with coworkers isn't particularly terrible, I just never seem to get past the usual hi and bye xD
I'm actually surprised I made friends with a couple of them, tbh o:
though that was them mostly doing the work to reach out to me, so I'm glad they were persistent in talking to me, lol
@Ixora: I googled apple turnovers and they do look the same.
@Apollo Im Burning: At my previous work I always had to work with someone. So not talking was not even an option.
November 2017 - February 2018
@vengeance: Thank you so much for the input. That's kind of what I was starting to lean towards anyway, but I wasn't totally sure. Because despite the fact that this new character is a bit on the "plain" side, at least as far as her style of dress goes, I feel she has the potential to be a different kind of main/central character compared to some of the others out there.
@vengeance: I'm not sure they're the same but visually, they're really similar XD
November 2017 - February 2018
@apollo im burning: No worries at all. I understand if you're not really feeling up to commenting on what I said. Thank you so much for letting me know though.
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i am tapping out of talking in this thread for the time being, sorry nun;;;;;;
pls don't
@Lithinel: I feel like if you have to change to much to fit her in then it's not going to work.
@Ixora: I looked at the ingredients and they are the same.
@Apollo Im Burning: No problem.
@vengeance: The process could be different?
I'm also tapping out for now for sleep reasons (∪。∪)。。。zzz
Gotta get up in a couple of hours. Told my dad I was making us melon smoothies for breakfast XD
I'm also tapping out for now for sleep reasons (∪。∪)。。。zzz
Gotta get up in a couple of hours. Told my dad I was making us melon smoothies for breakfast XD
November 2017 - February 2018
@vengeance: That makes a lot of sense, actually. So really, thank you for the opinion. Now I just need to decide who gets the Nephilim-Cambion Boarding School/Save Haven combination story and whose story gets a different plot entirely. Although to be honest, I'm thinking I'm going to give this current plot to the new girl (who is not yet named) and make the other girl get a whole new story once again. Lol.
November 2017 - February 2018
Like I just feel the new girl fits this plot better.
@Ixora: Sleep is always good.
@Lithinel: That is something only you can decide.
November 2017 - February 2018
@vengeance: I mean, I already changed the other girl's story like three times, so what's once more? I just haven't found the right place for her yet I suppose.
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Having you as a Voltie would be awesome.