@Wildfire: oh for sure haha. I think if I redid it it's possible I can do it right. I think it's just discombobulated and in the wrong order or something. And I think I need more about the characters. It's too much dialogue. But I'm going to finish the first draft first and then redo it as the second draft I think.

It is November, time to eat all that candy.

@Wildfire: Exactly what I thought. And I can clean up my notes some because I wrote a lot down to remember as I was writing because there's so many characters and names and I need to remember who is what and who did what and all that. So I can clean that up and it'll be good.

It is November, time to eat all that candy.